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7.30.2008

[emerge]

bearing witness,
through this keyhole of the cacoon:



peering in with wide-eyed lense-
moans of dying,
motions of life.
paining to see the wisdom in this



apparently thoughtless strife.
bearing witness,



what God would strike this creature down
and let it go hours unsoothed.



kill it this instant!
if i had any might,
if i had bigger eyes
they'd eat the blood, with their claw-like lashes



and clam the creature to a calm death.
bearing witness,



my eyes are dry-
nothing develops ,
nonsense diverts .
focused on the pain and how the world is dying



apparently so achingly.
bearing witness;





then God emerges, changing heart
and unlets chains of gnawing depth:



the gut eases and me -
tears submit,
tremors rip
this worm into a dove, fluttering



apparently so flawlessly,
bearing witness.~

4 comments:

gingatao said...

That is a wonderful poem, very strong. I like these poems that have a kind of courage and claiming of a voice in them especially when they are so well executed. It goes so dark and almost Macbethlike and violent but still quiet in the middle so it can escape with great energy into a transcendent image at the end. Sorry, that is a long comment but it is a supercool poem.

tangobaby said...

I agree with gingatao. Somehow you make even the dark and scary things beautiful.

mrs. sarah ott said...

thank you both. i guess i was feeling rather gothic. must be the coming of dark in the late hours

Paul said...

Experimenting with the Time Machine, Mrs Ott. It is working splendidly. I love the classical modern style of this poem, neo classical coolness of it.

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